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FCBLComish
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:13:18 PM permalink
Quote: gordonm888

This has been a well-written narrative - very readable and good narrative tension. I'm enjoying it. The people criticizing this thread do not write as well as DarkOz.

Not Even Bob.



Let me make it perfectly clear that I agree with Gordon here. I am really enjoying the read. I am sorry it is at Darkoz's expense though.
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:13:43 PM permalink
Since Evenbob thinks a short version is better, here goes.

I got robbed

There were a handful of suspects

I figured out who did it

The end

If everyone is happy with that version this thread is finished
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:14:56 PM permalink
Quote: darkoz

Since Evenbob thinks a short version is better, here goes.

I got robbed

There were a handful of suspects

I figured out who did it

The end

If everyone is happy with that version this thread is finished



No!!! Keep going. This thread is aces.
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:17:59 PM permalink
Quote: unJon

No!!! Keep going. This thread is aces.



Please keep going!!
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EvenBob
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:23:08 PM permalink
Quote: gordonm888

This has been a well-written narrative - very readable and good narrative tension. I'm enjoying it. The people criticizing this thread do not write as well as DarkOz.

Not Even Bob.



I'm not writing fiction as he obviously
is. I'm just rattling off opinions. My
writing gets better too if I'm writing
a who done it novella..
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:23:36 PM permalink
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EvenBob
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:26:08 PM permalink
Quote: darkoz

Since Evenbob thinks a short version is better, here goes.

I got robbed

There were a handful of suspects

I figured out who did it

The end

If everyone is happy with that version this thread is finished



See? How hard was that. Good for you,
call the cops now. Because I know
none of the people involved, I don't
need to know who did it. Whether it's
a true story or not. I'm very good at
walking out of movies half way thru,
my wife hates it. So we always drive
separate cars to the theater.
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:28:23 PM permalink
Quote: EvenBob

See? How hard was that. Good for you,
call the cops now. Because I know
none of the people involved, I don't
need to know who did it. Whether it's
a true story or not. I'm very good at
walking out of movies half way thru,
my wife hates it. So we always drive
separate cars to the theater.



Soooo

Why are you still in this thread?

Shouldn't you have walked off by now

Its the halfway point fyi
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EvenBob
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:31:47 PM permalink
Quote: darkoz

Soooo
Why are you still in this thread?
Shouldn't you have walked off by now



I did, I'm halfway down the block
waving at you. Look for my red
MAGA hat, you can't miss it.
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January 16th, 2019 at 4:32:28 PM permalink
Keep going Darkoz,I'm enjoying it.
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